h4nahaki want to read (All 474)
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i can’t even remember how many chapters its been since they’ve been in felixs bed but at this point anybody i plead rip this man off of her!!!! i want at least some form of story progression but felix who is the equivalent of a dog in heat wont get off of sera and theyve been in his god forsaken bed for days!! someone get this girl tf out
I can’t even bring myself past 10 chapters, this manhwa has been sitting in my waitlist for 4 years so I had the epiphany to say fuck it i’ll finally pick this up. Mistake. I wasted my time even trying to force myself past even 5 chapters but I somehow made it to 10. To lay it out bluntly the fl is one of those typical “bruh” girls i’m sure many of you have had the misfortune of coming across. She is just so….. ignorant and unbearably annoying, there are so many ways to write a strong willed respectable fl but this manwha just misses the entire mark. Her personality is the equivalent of self inserts on wattpad that 5th grade schoolgirls write about. It’s just SO embarrassing to read I can’t even force myself to finish it. The ml is also one of the most bland copy paste “obsessive” characters that are just shit in general, nothing special. This story has had zero impact in hooking me in at all, the premise of this story in theory is great sure. But the execution? Lacks everything in terms of likeable characters. Is it so hard to create characters that aren’t corny to the extent that I will have to set my phone down every minute throughout reading almost every interaction because of the secondhand embarrassment you feel?
I think you didn't give much chance to the story. I also originally thought it was going to be full of red flags and that I would have to read it more like a psychological thriller instead of a historical romance drama, but it wasn't like that at all when I kept with it. Around chapter 20, I think the real plot took off where both leads have character development. Neither of them truly become "perfect" people by the end of the main story, but they each grapple with their main flaws and try to change themselves for the better so that they can be happy together. Yes, the FL is always kind of blunt/tom-boyish but she becomes more discerning after events and part over arching theme of the story is centered around her struggle with societal changes and views on how women "should" behave. Likewise, the ML unpacks his own issues that came from years of abuse. It's true that he is obsessively possessive in the beginning, but part of his character development addresses that and focuses on his own regrets that make him work towards being someone the FL deserves. The beginning was definitely rough with things that happened that were not okay, but by the end you really feel like they both put in the effort to be a good, healthy couple.