beta
i read the first few chapters and decided to skip around the story. even trying to stay w the storyline when something major happens but it still makes no sense. the storyline is poor, the characters are assholes, and the rape is disgusting. idk why he didn’t bother to explain to the mc why the blond guy was so bad. i couldve seen some potential but a lot of the shit i wouldve thrown away and gone a different direction.