I don't know if I'm the only one but the first 2 chapters reminds me of Gon and Killua of HunterXHunter.
I don't want to be rude or something but please. These story already has an uploader. Don't upload over them. Especially if it isn't properly done. Even if you did well, ask permission first to upload over someone. If you have the permission. Please, make it worth their permission.
Drama it is!! Now I'm even more hooked. I just love LQ's and the dramas that will arise out of it.
So for me the story is good, plot wise. Also the Art Syle and Character Design and Behavior are all, top notch. What I was concerned about is their Dialogues are way to bland. The scene is heating up but the the dialogue is thill stagnant, which for me ruined the whole story, some lines are even cringy. Also people who give poor rating because of the plot, why even read when it was already in the description that there's Imprisonment and non consensual sex?? Are you dumb??
I was laughing so hard at the dream part, because it brings back memories to me. I also had a dream of me and my classmate, then I texted him to f*ck off. When we met at school. He keeps on asking what was that for, but I'm embarrassed to sweat the details.
Even without a real story behind as in your case it is so funny Bastard! Eat shit! While he is sleeping peacefully... :).. Can´t wipe the smile off, it is a lovely chapter :D