Although this was cute it just feels like smut with highschoolars
Honestly I think i'm just too dumb to understand what this story is trying to tell. Like I can see it's trying to give me the deeper meaning and how essentially both of them are in the wrong (now that mc killed a child) but I just don't get it. I don't get the appeal and it feels like the author isn't used to writing dark stories (like I said before maybe I'm too dumb) bc I've read some before that explained it all a lot better than this
I like the premise, I like the friends making up with each other, I like Katou.. but wasn't really fond of kasa (I don't truly dislike him, I just think he was a character that needed more chapters to be developed). Pretty solid light hearted story to pass the time, the characters are pretty flat but it's overall nice
By the king's order, Ennid, a genius alchemist, needs to develop a potion that shows one's...
- Author: Dongjeon Banji
- Genres: Adult / Fantasy / Romance / Yaoi / Webtoons
Is this worth it? Does it have too much drama? Is it a love triangle?;
Is this worth reading? I'm honestly skeptical of anything nearing 100 chapters cause that seems like unnecessary dragging it out so the story won't end
Not yall complaining and saying you're disappointed bc it's the same author from cry me a river as if that work didn't have rape too. Um hello?????
Ch32: it's kinda crazy to me how no one is taking about this domestic violence which btw is exactly what the seme's mother suffered. Um.. hello?
Ch35: fuck I'm manipulated too easily, this sweet chapter already made me forget everything
Ch37: shit that made me get giggly
Ch48: damn. Mf really be saying uke's gonna get pneumonia but he himself (seme) was out there for so long and even came back with TWO coffees, one for him and for uke. Legit crying.
Ch54: LMAO I love their chibi characters, specially uke's. The way his skin glows even when he has the dead fish expression is so funny (I'm gonna ignore the fact he did something to seme while he was asleep for the well being of my consciousness).
CH54: BREAK HIS ANKLE? HELLO???? "HES CUTE" HELLO???????
Ch55: SHIIIIIIT I HATE HIS YOUNGER TWIN. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK HES CUTE BUT I HATE LOVE HIM
Ch59: ugh uke's chibi rubbing seme's belly... so cute. ngl I liked the ending. I still hate his mother very much but she's bearable for now. I liked the story although uke was toxic and a red flag almost the entire story.
I get a feeling that the savage one/3rd personality actually only needs to consume something from the sacrifice so he will probably shallow his cum and won't be hungry anymore (not a spoiler, just a guess)
This is actually funny AND there's no non-con. 5 stars. No questions needed.
This official translation has more mistakes than machine translations... anyway, this story was a bit disappointing. Usually, BL mangas have 5 chapters and are more well written than this. The pacing wasn't good, the reason for distancing himself wasn't well written as well (they could still use the same reason but have written their feelings and conflicts a lot better) and the resolution to the problem was a let down as well. At least the characters were fun. 5 out of 10.
This was good, I'd say 8 out of 10. What bothered me was the solution for the ppl that murdered MC's original body. Sure, I agree with killing the crazy man but if we think about it, that woman was being threatened to go along with his plans and she just wanted to stay alive for her little daughter, her death left a bitter taste on my tongue. Also, the stalker problem seemed like something made only to make the story last longer. And there's the fact that we got no resolution to what happened with the real Hayley.
Ch30-33: I'm about to piss some ppl off (if this comment ever find someone who has already read this, which I doubt since the hype died a long time ago since the end of this manhwa) but the sex scene was so uncomfortable to read, the whole time I was wishing MC would kick ML off or explain the actual real reason as to why he pushed ML inside the room just so ML would stop
This is legit the best story of this author. Not only is it wholesome it's also well written. Perfect.
One thing that I would change tho is giving more moments with the children while they're still babies
Is this worth reading? Does it have too much drama? Is it non con? Is it more than 1 ML?
Honestly, things had been going so well for a while that I legit forgot about the shit things caesar had done to lee-won. And now I realize how manipulative he truly is, like damn even I'm falling for his trap. This mf shooted lee-won, raped him while he was still recovering, threatened him and now almost killed himself to make lee-won stay and here I am past the point where I simply can't hate him. This mf is good. Like a few chapters ago it was such a funny little interactions about lee-won realizing he's gonna have to buy that expensive pen, and the funny interactions with ceasar "meeting" mc's dad, and their chibi are so cute ...and now here we are. Damn. Why can't I hate him???? Fuuuck I'm like the MC rn
For someone that had only written josei/straight mangas before this is pretty good