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Honestly I think we’re missing a whole lot of information about the world building and also the characters. I get it, they’re cute together but them as characters are inconsistent. For example when did MC fall in love with ML? All we got to see up to that point was them going to the cinema and never even saw them truly talking to each other (except on later on chapters when they had sex). Also about MC opening up to ML, to me it was out of character, like he had no reason to trust ML and knew he was a vampire. (At ch16 he makes it seem like he doesn’t kill humans so if he didn’t know he was a vampire he wouldn’t have accepted to kill ML). But now that I think about it, y’see.. MC might actually not know he’s a vampire and if that is the case then it just shows how this manwha doesn’t really know how to write a consistent timeline. We have to keep on guessing things that should’ve already been explained. Like I’m guessing he has been an hunter for years now and by the amount of experience he has then he should’ve known better than to have sex with the person he’s supposed to kill and tell him about your past, no? Another example would be MC’s special ability, does he know he has it? Cause he definitely knows hair changing colors is not normal, that’s basic logic and there’s also the fact he remembers what the killer of his family said, so why is it that his power was never introduced to us?
I know they are cute together now but as someone who binge read this it really shows just how rushed their relationship was and how sudden their change in personalities was too. They might’ve built a stronger bond “off cameras” but what’s the point if we as readers don’t see it?
Don’t get me wrong i like the potential this has but I know it could’ve been a lot better, it’s a shame really. I love the ideia they had for this universe and if only it was introduced better… :/ I hope that as it slowly gets updated I will forget the bits of mistakes in writing.
I don’t know if this is an adaptation from a novel but if it is then it explains a lot