What the actually fuck was this? Sometimes I couldn’t tell if I was reading the past or the present. The witch friend was forgotten, the SON was forgotten (like father like son ig), the dialogues didn't fucking make sense, the plot didn't make sense, the seme is a big fucking trash, the seme gets on my nerves, all the characters get on my nerves, the vampire plot was simply forgotten (who was the guy that smiled at the last panel from the chapter Angelo was strangled??? I guess we'll never know ) and also WERENT THEY IN COLLEGE? WHAT DO YOU MEAN HIGHSCHOOL???? This is honestly the worst shit I've wasted my time reading
Crazy how this author's smut scenes are always so good, tbh one of the best in this site. Also idk if the dicks and holes are a redraw or if it's from the original illustrator but damn it's so good too
Idk their relationship feels kinda forced/rushed. We haven't seen a single chemistry outside their smut scenes bc that's all the scenes they have together. Their one true conversation was that time uke told him his backstory and even that felt like it was cut in half
That's probably bc it's literally just 14 chapters It's a short story Meh
What??? It'll end in the next chapter?? Damn that's sad. Tbh It's still not really an excuse, I've read a lot of short stories and the characters have more chemistry than this. If the author would invest in scenes of them together other than having sex it already would've been better
What??? It'll end in the next chapter?? Damn that's sad. Tbh It's still not really an excuse, I've read a lot of short stories and the characters have more chemistry than this. If the author would invest in sce... Matsusan
It's more like a sweet open ending tho, so I guess the author's intention is to leave it to us to imagine that they would cultivate and deepen their relationship after the story
Damn it's been so long since I've last read this but I remember being uncomfortable in many scenes. Now idk if it's worth reading it all again or if i should simply drop it
It have a lot of angst, and twist back and forth. But you could read it again if you don't mind angst, bc every character is toxin and have a problems.
Thinking of dropping this.. the ML didn't have a single character development. Like if you read chapter 1 and read the latest chapter now he's still the same. It feels like we're walking in circles
How do yall know the younger guy is the top? Also how long is the time skip? I'm wondering if I should stop reading cause I don't like old characters and I saw someone saying the gangster is lime 30 rn so how old would he be after the time skip?
I’m assuming you mean power bottoms? Minmotion Syndrome The Pizza Delivery Man and the Gold Palace BOSS, BXTCH, BABY! Touch-Up Diss Love off the top of my head and highly recommended
I’m assuming you mean power bottoms?Minmotion SyndromeThe Pizza Delivery Man and the Gold PalaceBOSS, BXTCH, BABY!Touch-UpDiss Loveoff the top of my head and highly recommended JNRY
Nope, I said these types of seme/tops not the bottom but thank you for replying!
Nope, I said these types of seme/tops not the bottom but thank you for replying! Matsusan
Oh sorry read it wrong and wrote wrong but the seme/tops from these stories I recommended are the same types from this story lol the golden retriever types lol
I've got a feeling that the MC will die and we'll enter the reincarnation route. If we think about it he'll die of old age anyway so either the author will make the ML turn into a human or make the MC turn into something else orr they both die and reincarnate in modern times
What the actually fuck was this? Sometimes I couldn’t tell if I was reading the past or the present. The witch friend was forgotten, the SON was forgotten (like father like son ig), the dialogues didn't fucking make sense, the plot didn't make sense, the seme is a big fucking trash, the seme gets on my nerves, all the characters get on my nerves, the vampire plot was simply forgotten (who was the guy that smiled at the last panel from the chapter Angelo was strangled??? I guess we'll never know ) and also WERENT THEY IN COLLEGE? WHAT DO YOU MEAN HIGHSCHOOL???? This is honestly the worst shit I've wasted my time reading