
I liked the ending! I was routing for Seo from the beginning anyways…But ngl at some point I did kind of start resenting Jae because of how he betrayed his twin brother like that and it made be frustrated how he thought he could keeping staying with Ohm AS Seo?? Like in the long run it obviously wouldn’t have worked. And the fact that his brother trusted him enough to ask for help but not only did he lie more but also hurt his twin in the process (sorry kind of Seo biased hehe). But near the end when Ohm asked them to win him over we didn’t get to see much of Jae so it would have been nice to add more of him~ although it was clear from the beginning that Seo was end game because most times he had a flashback it was of the actual Seo and Ohm had more reaction to Seo to begin with then Jae. Also the fact that Ohm only opened up to Jae acting like Seo after the real Seo talked to Ohm in the pool room about sharing their pain of being bullied~ I think that Seo did get a good character development of from being a shy and awkward person to have more confidence in himself though!
Ok I wanted to read this bc it saw it on TikTok and ngl this story lowkey mid also this is my opinion so…get off my ass LMFAOO. But the fm felt so like….childish idk? She had the whole revenge thing as her whole personality in the beginning and then we just never got to fully see it go down…And as for the ml he’s ight. He’s not that interesting? Kinda lame in my opinion. Ok let’s be real HES BASIC. M-M-M-MIDDDDDD. I’m just disappointed in the fl bc I thought it was gonna be a whole “I’m gonna get revenge and rise up to the top even though being born into a community where I wasn’t properly educated” but the whole story was just them having sex every damn chapter I feel like more could have been done but wtv. Damn but that one guy who’s hella pretty and pretended to be a female why does he have more personality and just overall more interesting than the actual ml . But I’m mostly upset at the side stories??? I thought they would dedicate the side stories to the child…also I’m not tripping right?? The first born was a female LOL. Every chapter was them having sex like damn where is your child at??? Are you even raising him yourself are you present?? also the names for some of the characters are Mongolian and as a Mongolian that’s hella cool I ain’t even know ppl knew we existed AHHAH ok ANYWAY AGAIN THIS IS MY OPINION YOU R FREE TO HAVE YOURS SO PLEASE DONT FIND AND JUMP ME.
even though I really liked this and was looking forward to the side story, but for some reason the side story made the story not as exciting. I just wanted to see a happy family but instead there was very little togetherness with their children and the side story instead discussed many other things right..