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“The End.” BRO WE DIDNT EVEN GET TO START TO UNPACK EVERYTHING THAT JUST HAPPENED. You’re telling me that in less than 5 chapters our mc went from saying “fucking your brother isn’t normal? What’s so wrong with that?”, to getting kidnapped and beat, to gaining back all his memories from years of rape/torture, to his brother getting stabbed, to him running away saying “fuck off you freak”, then spinning back to kiss him, to both going into comas, to now both acting like they don’t remember a thing and making it into a cutesy little do over. WHAT ARE WE DOING??!!!! Like omg ts couldn’t have been more rushed. Loved the beginning; sick twisted shit. The end though, what a horrible way to turn them into a “non-toxic” couple, THEYRE STILL BROTHERS.