seriously i dont know what the author was going for with his personality like... he beat up and kidnapped yanai? nope never mind he's actually super ultra sweet. but then supposedly he's an easily jealous psycho? nope never mind that just forget it was ever mentioned.
my biggest thing is the kidnapping part. like, why even include that? looking at the rest of the story it was just really out of character for maki if he was obsessed with yanai but WASN'T all yandere because of it after all. it really soured the rest of the story, wish the author didnt include that bit at all.
boring plot, 0 real resolution to any issues, important stuff gets glossed over like the seme being a cheater, the possessiveness quickly becomes creepy and he just feels two-faced even if he's "sincere", all in all it's just boring ineffective writing hidden by copious amounts of smut. i would be more forgiving if it was strictly pwp but this author is trying to actually write a plot here..... ok best of luck girl but i am looking away
seriously, faking a suicide attempt just to get muyeong to ditch seonho???? and he was just instantly forgiven for it????? what kind of manipulative ass shit..... seriously if i was muyeong i wouldve dropped his ass then and there and ran back to seonho instantly. but for that matter muyeong isn't innocent either after telling seonho to his face that all he was doing was unimportant. wanting to go see his friend if he was supposedly knocking on death's door moments ago is 100% understandable but he did NOT have to act towards seonho in that way
I KNOW THIS WAS BOUND TO HAPPEN BUT IM IN SO MUCH PAIN