Guys I’m gonna be terribly honest the translation of this webtoon is ass. I have read so many bad translations in the past that I have a decent understanding of what’s going on and the story I think would be really good it’s not too fast-paced, and the art style is phenomenal but we got to stop putting webtoons on here that have the worst Google translations ever. Please we are better than this
So if my understanding is correct. This rando who’s a fan of the work of “Sheldon” idk if that is also a pen-name or a real one; is visually looking, smelling, “acting” like his manhwa character. A story ultimately written as a result of his loneliness and lack of tlc by people he’d assume would be there for him during his hardest times. While he’s being forced to reenact his story, he is living the life he ultimately(and masochistically) always wanted… while maybe not as intense or painful, still. So while he’s trying to maintain his sense of reality of what the human psyche expects (using his panels to contact the outside world, on the rare occasion he’s alone trying to escape) he is snuggling up to this sadistic teddy bear and covering himself up in this blanket of unrealized truth. He doesn’t really want to escape at least not in the emotional sense. He’d rather use their real names and real obsession instead of being forced into a constant state of RP where he is being forced to live how he’d like and still be uncertain if his captor loves him or his creation. The sharing leashes panel made me assume this. Because while ML physically has him tethered MC definitely holds the emotional leash. He has the ability to open the ML’s heart to the”real” him using his webtoon and hopefully the author uses that to their advantage when continuing this series.
Like... I like the smut it’s very good, but the lack of an actual romance is kinda putting me off. At least have the ML pine over one of her “puppies”. Hyunwoo needs a new love interest too I was hoping he’d go after Sunhee or a new femdom but I can clearly see that’s not the case. Like maybe hed want to try a real dick instead of a silicon one. But I don’t see that happening ever
Listen to those who are not well versed in S&M this definitely looks like rape. But realistically and while it’s shown to have lasted longer for fictional purpose, Richard is clearly in a different headspace and was too far gone to realize his S was in pain. Artistically speaking every time we saw his eyes in this chapter they were dazed not focused and just yearning. As a virgin and someone who has such strong desires being met fairly easily everytime their together, it’s very easy to succumb to that headspace doing the real thing. Her pleas for him to slow down wasn’t harsh enough to break him but as we saw at the tail end of this chap he was finally able to come back down
. For her she’s experiencing her first time a little differently, as a newly appointed S she’s just admiring her handiwork in making sure this man is satisfied not realizing it can get dangerous really fast and I’m happy it happened sooner rather than later. If they were to establish a relationship with him tied up their trust for each other would plummet the moment they tried it without him tied up as you can see with free reign he can’t handle his headspace with his lover. So it creates an opportunity and a storyline where they take it a step at a time instead of rushing it like they did.
Of course as readers we wanna see booba and cocka but for a good story I think it’s coming along relatively well and realistic.
Yes it was harsh yeah it was painful but hopefully we’ll see them learn a bit more and grow into their desires and learn to dance in tune with each other.
Edit: The reason why I’m saying it like(and while it might sound unempathetic) this is because ultimately she was the one who forced it in due to her impatience. He was just ‘following orders’ until she was finally able to get him to stop. In real life for a terribly horny M that’s a wet dream if I’ve ever seen one being ‘forced’ to have sex. Now in real life this situation would be done by professionals or people well versed in bdsm this is a story of two virgins exploring a way of life dangerously and carelessly. For now at least. Like I said it has room for growth and potential.
Couldnt have said it more perfectlyy, omg♡
Thank you for making this so easy to understand! They’re both virgins who also are experiencing this dynamic together for the first time, it was bound to be sloppy
I fully agree.
Thank you so much for your comment!!