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Look, I know Ash is a good person. I know Carlisle is also a good person. We know their trauma. Dear Author, your writing is PHENOMENAL!!!! Talk about gut-wrenching for Carlisle to see Ash with Hazel.
Theory: Could Hazel have imprinted on Ash without his permission or overstepped some sort of boundary? I am so excited for the next chapter!!!!
What in the name of money-wasting, time-consuming, terrible plot line is this? Why spend all that money, put in all that effort to go, just to have him come in without so much as an apology and you’re like “Yup. Can’t get away. Let’s bang.” The seme hasn’t developed through the course of this comic, uke hasn’t developed over the comic, and the art is getting worse?!
Save yourself the trouble. Don’t bother with this one. Unless you are a writer and want an example of exceptionally terrible plot lines and non-existent character arcs. A 10-year-old could write a better story than this. Smh.