What in the name of money-wasting, time-consuming, terrible plot line is this? Why spend all that money, put in all that effort to go, just to have him come in without so much as an apology and you’re like “Yup. Can’t get away. Let’s bang.” The seme hasn’t developed through the course of this comic, uke hasn’t developed over the comic, and the art is getting worse?!
Save yourself the trouble. Don’t bother with this one. Unless you are a writer and want an example of exceptionally terrible plot lines and non-existent character arcs. A 10-year-old could write a better story than this. Smh.
Look, I know Ash is a good person. I know Carlisle is also a good person. We know their trauma. Dear Author, your writing is PHENOMENAL!!!! Talk about gut-wrenching for Carlisle to see Ash with Hazel.
Theory: Could Hazel have imprinted on Ash without his permission or overstepped some sort of boundary? I am so excited for the next chapter!!!!
What a pair of self-centered jerks. Neither one of them is in a position to be on a moral high ground. One refuses to communicate like a normal person and strings him along like a toy, the other comes onto him constantly despite KNOWING the emotional turmoil he is dealing with. Neither of them consider that they’re ruining the friendship, completely crossing boundaries that he has set, and either communicate too much or too little. Grow up… I feel terrible for OP. Why’d he have to catch feelings for such a jerk and have such an insensitive self-centered alternative as a friend. Uuuuuuuugh!
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