Man this is cute but the blackmail plot made the uke falling in love feel even more rushed, so the ending is happy and I enjoy it but it feels out of place in the story.
The seme just comes off as an unlikable, selfish asshole for most of the story due to the blackmail plot, since Sora is so distressed about losing his powers and desperately wants to go home.
It would’ve been much better if Sora lost his powers in a weird accident from running away from home or if Eriru accidentally took away his powers, and the plot was more focused on Eriru giving Sora a place to stay as long as he helped out at the brothel. The story wouldn’t have to be changed much and Eriru wouldn’t be nearly as much of an unlikable prick.
The author is a very sweet person but god this doesn’t make any sense, it’s not good writing.
Hyunwo has interacted with the real Jimin twice. He’s barely over his dead gf and his mom.
Like I’m pretty sure we’re not supposed to read into it more from the raws. It’s just like, the magic of Jimin’s love sets him on the route to recovery in like a day when they get married.
I agree. Did they even talk about that Jimins "brother" was a lie? Things have gone waaay too fast now and it's like they didn't even talk about anything. I cannot believe that guy who is in love with Jimin did not do anything.
I think it cold be just Hyunwoo dreaming or something. Before Jimin appeared to clean up Hyunwoo saw many strange things so maybe this is included? He was a long time home alone in depression so maybee?
I’m completely lost on the plot. I have been for a while now. I don’t know if it’s an issue with translation or the story itself, but whew boy this manga quickly turned from interesting psychological thriller to dumb shit.