I think the kids were adorable and the two main characters could've had more story behind them. But I do believe that the author made this really fast and didn't put much thought into it. The author could've wrote/draw more explaining what happened to the sister and maybe some drama if she came back. I also feel like the Author should've dug deeper with the characters emotions instead of just making the Seme fall in love all of a sudden.
Oh yeah and also not made the Seme so much of an asshole. I thought I misinterpreted the part when the Father was about to hit the baby until some comments pointed that out.
I think the kids were adorable and the two main characters could've had more story behind them. But I do believe that the author made this really fast and didn't put much thought into it. The author could've wrote/draw more explaining what happened to the sister and maybe some drama if she came back. I also feel like the Author should've dug deeper with the characters emotions instead of just making the Seme fall in love all of a sudden.
Oh yeah and also not made the Seme so much of an asshole. I thought I misinterpreted the part when the Father was about to hit the baby until some comments pointed that out.