This has so much potential but the narration is dragging it to the ground. The sudden change of Point of view and how the plot progresses, it’s all over the place. I’m quite disappointed off how it was done because half way through, I’m starting to get tired of reading because of how the story unfolds.
so i saw that there is basically “Three worlds” and Iheon is in control of their life now, not huimin. And Iheon turned back time before the incident happen OR he created another world were he can reset the time to make things better for them. BUT where is the “regular” huimin came from were they don’t have their third gender (omegaverse)??
Side note: This is the only omegaverse were they didn’t explain thoroughly the traits of each gender, unlike other stories which is SO GREAT because I feel like it’s already a common knowledge for the target audience that author wants to reach. So brilliant, chef kiss. But I still need some explanations
he may be a maggot but he’s brain is functioning well- can read and acquire vocabulary. Maybe he’s a human tank that went through rigorous training that develops his brain into another level that’s why even he’s dead, his brain still functions well because of all the brain muscle training.
i reread some of the chapters and saw a scene where the queen trapped and tortured 9 children by neglecting them food and water until only 5 children remains. THAT IS WILDDD I hope that every bad thing happens to lee nok will come 10x stronger to her like damnnn and she poisoned a family with a pregnant woman and 2 children likeeee omayghad give this b her own space in hell
I can see the point that they want to make but the kiss on the first chapter made me ick. And the aura is not explained enough so I’m hella confused why no one reacts when they kissed. Also, this has some elements from Kiraide Issasite so it got me reread it and I’m thankful for that
kind of second guessing my understanding, did the lion (first mate) of beryl tried to make a child with him when he’s underage??i don’t know his age yet but he looks pretty young
it started good but eventually it became shallow and not that interesting. The action events would’ve been a nice foundation but I guess it would not be a healthy one. Great communication and an absolute green flag characters. I must’ve reading a lot of dramatic stories I find it boring that the cop factor lacks the depth since it rarely has action scenes. Good read though.
His emotional maturity really sold me. He really became so honest with Tanaka like bro can communicate than most of human males (⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)
