
so i saw that there is basically “Three worlds” and Iheon is in control of their life now, not huimin. And Iheon turned back time before the incident happen OR he created another world were he can reset the time to make things better for them. BUT where is the “regular” huimin came from were they don’t have their third gender (omegaverse)??
Side note: This is the only omegaverse were they didn’t explain thoroughly the traits of each gender, unlike other stories which is SO GREAT because I feel like it’s already a common knowledge for the target audience that author wants to reach. So brilliant, chef kiss. But I still need some explanations
This has so much potential but the narration is dragging it to the ground. The sudden change of Point of view and how the plot progresses, it’s all over the place. I’m quite disappointed off how it was done because half way through, I’m starting to get tired of reading because of how the story unfolds.
Their character also sometimes does things that are so out of character. Like, Karel’s remarks about Sasya and the freaking deep throat scene were so unnecessary. If his character is really supposed to be like a puppy or head-over-heels in love, he wouldn’t have done that to someone he perceives as fragile and precious. That was just him being lustful, plain and simple. And Sasya asking how Lord Skar got his scars—as if he didn’t know he went to war? Like, girl, I thought you were smart. What do you mean by that?? ╥﹏╥ I don’t know, I think I’m dropping this because it’s starting to feel inconsistent and kind of dumb. The characters aren’t making sense anymore, and it’s getting hard to stay invested.