beta
Chapter 1-15, really good set-up but then it got sloppy and rushed...
--those tribe characters only met the mc for like 2 chapters and they're treating him like a boss lol
--that Mossad character barely got any screentime and dev but we're supposed to feel sad with his death, sacrificing for mc? lmao
--after Mossad died, mc went berserk like his family member died and decided to destroy the tribe, after that mc walks away, and suddenly the vice chief of that tribe are saying his goodbye to mc with tears??? be fr it doesn't make sense like cmon it was ur valuable tribe where yall gave ur heart
--artsyle is good tho
--I hope this shit gets good but I'm done for tonight lol