Boring as hell. If it's gonna be porn no plot, at least make it good porn.
This author literally can not write a good story line. They have had so many opportunities to start redeeming the seme and at every opportunity they have made things worse. At this point the smut makes me feel sick and I don't even want to look at him. He's a disgusting person and he's not redeemable anymore. The author just repeatedly victimises Dan with barely any consequences to the seme. It's getting boring as hell. Dan needs to sue the seme for rape, sexual assault and work place harassment and win millions, then the seme needs to go to jail and die by "suicide" and Dan needs to find a green flag. But I bet the seme will get better eventually once he realises he likes Dan so he's someone of value, Dan will eventually forgive him and they will get married and ignore how the seme literally raped him many times.
You're literally so talented Juju! I hope your cancer treatment is going well and you get better:) Don't feel pressured or let down by anyone!
I dunno man, I read it a while ago and I never thought it was that good, the plot felt really unplanned and all over the place and the ending was real abrupt and random. I dunno, maybe this is a hot take but I think Killing Stalking was a pretty shit story hyped-up the the main stream because it was seen as "more normal". It started off pretty good and then kinda devolved into pretty shit story writing. Not hate to the author, they're really good at drawing and their concept was pretty interesting I just think the way it was handled wasn't great.