Boring as hell. If it's gonna be porn no plot, at least make it good porn.
i mean you're right
This author literally can not write a good story line. They have had so many opportunities to start redeeming the seme and at every opportunity they have made things worse. At this point the smut makes me feel sick and I don't even want to look at him. He's a disgusting person and he's not redeemable anymore. The author just repeatedly victimises Dan with barely any consequences to the seme. It's getting boring as hell. Dan needs to sue the seme for rape, sexual assault and work place harassment and win millions, then the seme needs to go to jail and die by "suicide" and Dan needs to find a green flag. But I bet the seme will get better eventually once he realises he likes Dan so he's someone of value, Dan will eventually forgive him and they will get married and ignore how the seme literally raped him many times.
lol, you just summarised the whole story
You're literally so talented Juju! I hope your cancer treatment is going well and you get better:) Don't feel pressured or let down by anyone!
As someone with a dissociative disorder, holy shit this was so real. Like this felt exactly like what I experience daily!
I wonder if the author did research to get it right then, or has experience. I don't have any experience but reading this ch definitely felt like what I imagine a dissociative episode to be like.
The imagery of him as a broken doll was impactful, and the bombarding of the different people talking at him like a sensory overload. I love it when authors & artist's really push their mediums and make it more than just a smutty comic.