I hate how the writer literally slanders the friendship that they had as a kid just for the ML to look good. They could've just written a different foil for it to work.
It would make sense if he met Sandor when he was like a teenager but he literally met him as a kid and then they haven't seen each other for a very long time and then all of the sudden, Sandor loves him?
Idk, I give up. I know what bullshit I'm getting at when I decided to continue reading it LMAO
this!!!!!!! Sandor is being villainized just to make the shitty seme look "good". such bad writing...
It will make sense if they've been hanging out close to each other since they were a kid but they're long distance bestie. It would also make sense if he met him in military service per example and is now obsessed with him or something.
Either it's a shitty character build up or it's just really bad writing
The smut part is ok it's just that it's disappointing that the plot leads to literally nothing at all.
It was going well in chapter 3 when he apologized teasing him when he saw how serious it was for the uke but he's a disappointment in chapter 4 like wtf are you doing? You don't owe him and even if you do, you can't do that the fuck
Let me admire myself for a second because I know for a fact that the teenager, wattpad reader me would go crazy on how possessive the seme was to the uke. The character development that I have as a reader is just incredible LOL
HAHAHAHA congrats!! This is too funny
I get that this is fictional and it shouldn't be taken seriously but it's frustrating how they wrote the MC that stupid (not naive but stupid) and virgins don't fucking over react like that. I'm a fucking virgin myself and I could be more vulgar than someone with a lot of experience. Even if you were born into a religious family, you're not gonna be that stupid. These type of character is really annoying. A lot of author does it too and some of them have written the exact same character and they're good because they were able to balance it out. In this story, it's straight up stupid smh this has a lot of potential and I do feel that it could be cute but imma drop this just for the sake of my mental health
AGREED. He's got no thought in his head. Irl this is a police case waiting to happen
If someone told me that they like me one day and then I started liking them back and they chickened back, I'd be out like I'm not gonna chase you TF you're the first one who entered my life.
Not another seme pretending that they didn't hear the uke say "stop it, take it out" for like a hundred of times already.
The translation caused a stroke for most of us but the spirit is there
So many unnecessary abuse and shit like what the fuck even is this? Even my dead grandma would wake up to curse this bullshit
I'm sorry but this type where the mc's stupidity are the only driving force of the plot is so annoying.
I can't even explain how stupid the MC is. It's like imprinted on his face already that he's being led on by that shitty ML. The blonde dude also pointed it out that possibility already too. What frustrates me the most is that if the author decided to not be basic and adjust some of the conflicts, this story could've been perfect.
It could've been about an MC who is inlove with his bestfriend and he notices that his bestfriend kept on leading him on so it'll became this challenge where he's never gonna tell him that he likes him or it'll became the reason why he's gonna distance himself from his bestfriend and now, the bestfriend will be the one who'll do the chasing.
Again, this isn't a bad idea of a plot but the unnecessary stupidity of the mc is driving me insane.
Sorry meant to up vote
I'm someone who looks forward for the next scene so I've been reading the english and raw left and right and it's crazy for me that I didn't even noticed that there are some censored scenes LMAO
Can u pls tell me where do you read the raw ?
Here it is
https://toonkor322.com/%ED%95%B4%ED%9B%84(BL)