Mixed feelings

MightyTurkey January 20, 2021 1:12 pm

So, the art is clean and pretty and that’s ok, the plot is kinda a mess, the story seem rushed, like, a lot, the plot points felt like made up from thin air, and in general there is no development, we start from a guy ringing a doorbell claiming to be a sexdoll(???) we explore the life of the protagonist, he rides a motorcycle, a random blowjob in the middle of the night (????????????) and the the last 2 chapters are just a spot to tell us how beautiful is to have a baby, nothing wrong with this, but this is not the type of story for a 5 chapters BL, it’s not even a real story, whatever.

Responses
    1ychii January 20, 2021 4:40 pm

    I respect your opinion but there's a bit more to the story than that! The last few chapters were also where it reveals that the seme and uke were actually from the same orphanage growing up, so it wasn't just about the baby. Coming from someone with step-parents, I'm really glad we got to see an adoptive family that finally wasn't abusive.
    Overall, I agree that this manga's plot isn't very deep but you can't really expect every read to be a masterpiece ^o^