the art is pretty but they lack expression

ayaaaghorl January 19, 2021 7:44 pm

i can't draw for shit but i just noticed how the facial expressions feel like they don't really express much. idk though. maybe it's because the art is too pretty. i love this story tho.

Responses
    Dingdring January 19, 2021 7:51 pm

    Yeah almost everyone seems to have dead lifeless eyes, especially the Fl and second prince. They seem more like robots instead of people.

    shaneeey022 January 19, 2021 8:02 pm

    yeah i dont wanna talk bad about other people's art since i draw myself but this could use more eyebrow expressions? eyes are hard to adjust but you it can change drastically with proper eyebrow game i think

    risa kim January 19, 2021 8:09 pm

    for example, she’s supposed to look shocked with a open mouth, but she just looks weird. her eyes and eyebrows are the same, so the face expression comes off odd ash

    Sugureta January 19, 2021 8:24 pm
    for example, she’s supposed to look shocked with a open mouth, but she just looks weird. her eyes and eyebrows are the same, so the face expression comes off odd ash risa kim

    Same the shock expression is a bit awkward.

    Why does she have to open her mouth that wide everytime she is in shock. lol.

    Squared Bunny January 19, 2021 10:32 pm

    I love the art and story, but in the later chapters I've gotten a bit annoyed over those gaping mouths when they talk or are stunned. Something is just off with those 'expressions', lol.