What worng with this wholesome and cute story???
well it's something
called opinion ヾ(☆▽☆)
plssss did you saw the sexual assaulting
Yes(◠‿◕)
In MY OPINION, everything happened so fast, so fast that the story and the characters seemed flat and boring. Also, because of that I didn't feel the love that they professed so hard (and that I felt that it came out of nowhere). It is predictable, there is no good development or writing. I would have liked more context. The fact that the seme so easily let a stranger give him a blowjob in the middle of the night, and then take him to his house where his little daughter is... Is there something to explain?
Once again, IT IS MY OPINION, if you thought it was wholesome and cute, ok, I respect it, like every person who should respect the opinions of others
I absolutely agree it felt too rushed that I personally couldn't get into it at all
tbh the conversations were off and i personally didn't like how he randomly sucked the book writer dude like just why- and like you said it was TOOOO FAST
i see, i can understand it. the story is so sweet but somehow i cant feel enough love... you know theres only a little interact (that showed) between them. but it doesnt matter for me, the ending doesnt feel rushed~ it just their progressed so fast....
I agree. Everything went so fast that i didnt really feel anything.
Reading this was like being in F1... that ruined everything to me honestly. And the writing...