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Nah dude I gotta agree with you there wish I did not read it also.
And to the response who said don't trash someone else's work, it's an opinion being voiced. The storyline was not good and the characters unrealistic. It's the same as someone not liking a book or movies, that's why critics exist. So grow up.
So... All these stories are about identical characters in all the stories, and annoying, needy and ridiculously girly ukes just one of them wasn't) that all they do is cry and beg for the seme's dicks so they can drool and make disgusting expressions while crying and then they whine and play the victim card saying "stop", but they already voluntarily spread their legs. That in a nutshell... I wish someone told me that earlier.
don't give me the "try doing something better" kind of crap, because I'm entitled to my opinion.