The 1st story's pace was completely rushed, especially in the first chapter the seme and uke were already obsessed with each other even though they had just met and we're acquainted for a day. The time line is unbelievable and the amount of drama between the 3 characters is irritating. Really didn't need to be so complicated and overdone the little bros instant love for the uke wasn't needed when the elder bro also loved the uke and the uke felt the same for him, all they had to do was get together and it would have been fine but whatever
The 1st story's pace was completely rushed, especially in the first chapter the seme and uke were already obsessed with each other even though they had just met and we're acquainted for a day. The time line is unbelievable and the amount of drama between the 3 characters is irritating. Really didn't need to be so complicated and overdone the little bros instant love for the uke wasn't needed when the elder bro also loved the uke and the uke felt the same for him, all they had to do was get together and it would have been fine but whatever