Is this worth it?

Ayi January 10, 2021 7:36 am

The inconsistency on the emotions and the actual characterization, the weird pacing, the emphasis of dark lighting/shadows on the art during dark topics... are all wrong? Weird?

The entire time, it’s kind of feel like I am reading while riding in a moving car...

I mean, I felt tired reading it.

The theme is unique and all but the delivery is messy... should I wait for the development? Anyone knows if this is worth it?

Responses
    Yoreadinfast January 10, 2021 8:04 am

    O my gosh I thoug I was the only one who felt that...like somewhere in chapter 8 I had to stretch my arms and relax cause its somewhat messy you know -_-

    being-you January 10, 2021 8:19 am

    well from what i heard she remains more or less door mat till the end.

    Ayi January 11, 2021 7:25 am
    well from what i heard she remains more or less door mat till the end. being-you

    I see, thanks for saving me from this headache

    Ayi January 11, 2021 7:26 am
    O my gosh I thoug I was the only one who felt that...like somewhere in chapter 8 I had to stretch my arms and relax cause its somewhat messy you know -_- Yoreadinfast

    Right? The visuals and the pace maybe are the reasons lol