I mean this is called the YAKUZA falls in love is it not, then why do we only ever see the story from minjun's perspective and never really see how daiki feels. Is this the authors first bl, did they not study other material idk just so much basic stuff that would be in ANY story isn't in this. Once again i understand the ominjun not getting how daiki feels about him or what's going on in his head by why the fuck do i never know hats happening and minjun is constantly getting embarrassed or being put in stupid situation.
Well japanese people are known for bad at showing emotions so... 乁( ˙ω˙ )厂
LMFAO YESSSS SAY IT LOUDER!!
My friend screencapped this comment and shared it to me. And we both absolutely agree. Haha this is about as deep as a puddle. Its obvious the creator was a bit inexperienced in developing a storyline and character arc. No shade tho, i like this manhua actually, i recommended this to my friend but now im a bit sorry. Haha
I always reread a previous chapter in case i missed one but its just FULL OF HOLES EVERYWHERE.
No offense lol but that's a load a crap reason. I don't see anyone else having a hard time expressing themselves in the story.(and if you just joking i'm sorry)
If i could put a laugh emoji i would right now lmao. I'm just honestly disappointed because i like these type of yakuza stories or this type of story in general. I know my feedback can be a bit much but i get so ugh when stories that could be amazing have something like this happen to them.
Nah your comment is totally on point.. Its such a shame coz this is sooo cute, i also love the mafia/clueless uke/co-parents trope. My friend recommended Honto Yajuu (but i think the translators dropped it, its been so long since the last chapter) so i told her to read this.. Still embarrassed about it lol (￣∇￣")
Still staying just for toma coz hes so darn cute
i was really enjoying this bl up until daiki caught minjun having that dream and then jerked minjun off acting like he wasn't affected by the situation. I get there are always those characters who show no emotion but even if everyone in the story doesn't know, the audience usually does. I mean like in every situation Daiki is just completely bland and shows no emotion other than when he is angry and even then its really boring. How he acting contradict his actions so much. He says that minjun has always been a temptation but it really doesn't feel like it. I hate that we see literally nothing from daiki's perspective, how he feels or what he thinks in basically anything through out the story. I mean yea he treats minjun differently and lets him get away with things but even those scenes feel so dry and confusing. i mean even from when they first met and daiki was checking Minjun's body, he shows no reaction and acts as if he isn't attracted to minjun. There is next to no or barely any real relationship development or just scenes were they really emotionally connect and it shows on daiki's face or in his actions that he is interested in minjun. Everything is happening WAY to fast like minjun falling for daiki, that dry as sex scene, and honestly how emotionally connected minjun is to toma. i am honestly so disappointed with this.