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Be brutally honest, how was this fanfic? XD this was my first ever so i tried my best (ignore my lack of punctuation and spelling...)
wowowo !!
I can imagine this happening (well im not a master fanfic judger but this is really good XD )ヾ(☆▽☆)
that was good i really thought it was a spoiler lol
Thank you guys ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
Bai pulls up in his car. Opens the door and asks little swan "How was school?" "did it go well?" "How about your senior, was he nice to you?" little swan nods to all of his questions as he closes the door behind him. He thinks about the "tradition" his mentors told him about with a heavy blush across his face. Bai notices this but stays quiet. After 30 seconds or so of silence. Little swan finally speaks "Bai when we get home i have something i want to dance for you..." Bai looks at little swan as if he already knows "what time it is." once the two arrive home Bai walks up the stairs with little swan behind him, still with a very noticeable blush across his cheeks. Bai sits down on the floor remaining quiet as little swan starts to take off his coat, which Bai blush because of dirty thoughts rushing through his mind. Little swan does a quick stretch. And begins to dance. The moonlight refracting from the window beams across little swans body. Little swan takes a moment to look at Bai who loos mesmerized with Little swans beauty. Little swans distraction causes him to trip, Bai catches little swan as he looks deep into his eyes. little swan begins to caress Bais chest upto his cheek. Bai stares at little swan and starts to move in closer.... And THEN THE AUTHOR ENDS THE CHAPTER THERE PLAYING LIKE NOTHING WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN.