The problem with being condensed

mewmew January 7, 2021 3:58 pm

The problem it is this is way to condense. In this chapter alone these are all the left out details.
* mc didn't talk to the solider only patted him on that back. Afterwards the solider would collapse in tears of relief saying how comforting that hand was.
* two the cities should be gone and the hosptsil should be in a rural area. The solider should threaten to kill the occupants for refusing to leave. While other soldiers leave he should be touched by a elderly patient and choose to stay and die alone with the hospital patients. Getting saved last minute.
* jinwoo naga's should have lost that battle and felt bad about it.
* jinwoos naga only fought one not two giants, losing to it showed that his summons are not all powerful.
* berus army had alot more character in the novel Constantly marching on enemies in a impressive way.
* in the chapter previous ever yuh one in Japan shouod lose hope when a s rank gate opens in America so they refuse to help Japan. Hope is returned when jinwoo steps up
* they were not im in a city setting they were scattered all over Japan, showing all the armies fighting in a city makes everything seem smaller in scale

Responses
    BunnyeatsMochi January 7, 2021 4:09 pm

    Yeah I was like it's all different in the novel. Tho Im still gonna read it

    Mikou January 7, 2021 4:13 pm

    Oh wow, it would have been so much better like that :o I'm going to try to find the novel because it's not the first time I see that they didn't put everything. Thank you for your info!

    Twainx January 7, 2021 4:34 pm

    Lol it’s sounds all cool but we have to take in account that the artist is not gonna draw all that. It will take them forever

    mewmew January 7, 2021 10:08 pm
    Lol it’s sounds all cool but we have to take in account that the artist is not gonna draw all that. It will take them forever Twainx

    Cool art with less story substance is not the best