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when i was reading i thought tetsu was faking his emotions at first and i got sick to my stomach thinking he was going to make nozomi go through what he already went through again. so i definitely get what you mean about needing a better build up in his feelings.
and same with the rape, it’s mentioned/showed constantly throughout the whole story and it’s really hard to just let it go as the characters did
I desperately want to like this story bc I appreciate how Tatsuyuki tries to help Nozomi deal w the abuse he went through but just the amount of unnecessary rape is so off-putting. And it's so messy I would have preferred a better build-up of tatsu's feelings for nozomi bc I felt that it was super rushed.
Like a 7/10 art style is so nice and there are some nice parts in here but just overall feels a little but unplanned / rushed. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍