Responses
Because first impression gives off a big impact. Who's to say that if it was bad in the first few chapters, the latter chapters would also be bad? It is hard to read, they seem like they lack a few pages or so, and it was poorly transitioned. The grammar is fine, the structures are fine, but the story itself, and the pages are not. (The art is good just the other stuff).
Why is everyone complaining about the chapters, its like the first couple ones only and it's not even hard to read.