Uh I had no idea what was going on the whole time like it seems everything was thrown in a...

Jumiso January 5, 2021 5:37 am

Uh I had no idea what was going on the whole time like it seems everything was thrown in at once, like his trauma was never fully talked about and it was just covered up with rape, im just confused, I knew there was going to be rape but like it lacks plot. The top’s only personality traits were the fact that he liked the bottoms voice and raped him. I think it could have been done better and replace some of the rape scenes with the top showing his actual love for the bottom and his voice and help his trauma, and in turn explain the trauma itself. It felt rushed with a bunch of plot holes but this is my personal opinion. I really loved the art tho

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    Jumiso January 5, 2021 5:38 am

    To anyone who reads this, I applaud you

    PeaceFujoshi January 5, 2021 7:51 am

    HMmM.. WELL- The uke's trauma is that i think there were bullies that said his voice sounds like a girl i mean- if you read it on i think chapter 2 when the seme pulled him in the van and then the uke didnt want to remove his hand from his mouth becuz of his trauma from his highschool days and then on chapter 3 i think, the seme said he loved the uke's voice which means he knew that the uke was embarrassed by his voice since he literally told him the recent chapter(2)AND the seme is already in loved and whipped for the uke since chapter 1, i think it was revealed in chapter 3 that the seme was having troubles with his music and then the uke went to his concert and started singing along with the seme and that made the seme fall in love with him.AND the seme also already confessed his love to the uke when the uke passed out in the van in chapter 2 he said "i love you" :')

    And i think its a oneshot. Like those who makes multiple chapters between 1-6 so i dont think it was supposed to be a story like those whose chapters are from 20-80. But i dont get it either but ithink it aint rushed and its just like that- ending with a cloffhanger :'(

    PeaceFujoshi January 5, 2021 7:54 am
    HMmM.. WELL- The uke's trauma is that i think there were bullies that said his voice sounds like a girl i mean- if you read it on i think chapter 2 when the seme pulled him in the van and then the uke didnt wan... PeaceFujoshi

    I think the chapter 3s are chapter 4s an the chapter 2s are chapter 3s since iread this yesterday and i already forgot what chapters it was :-/

    Pumpkinspice January 5, 2021 10:53 am

    Couldnt agree more