good story but end felt rushed

katieeee1231 January 5, 2021 3:06 am

I really enjoyed this story, it had a good plot and interesting characters. However, I feel like the ending could have been alot better than it is, no offense to the author it was still a great story, but something just felt off about it and it felt rushed. I also don't really get the whole Hajin breaking up with him thing. I feel like there should have been more chapters kinda going into that it just felt very sudden and left me confused. There were some parts I felt went on for to long like some of the flashbacks, but still it was a really good story. ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

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    Lemon Loser January 7, 2021 6:22 am

    i agree :""D i feel like the art was also rushed? maybe the creator lost passion for the story (which is totally ok) but the storyline did feel really scrambled towards the end

    katieeee1231 January 7, 2021 8:10 am
    i agree :""D i feel like the art was also rushed? maybe the creator lost passion for the story (which is totally ok) but the storyline did feel really scrambled towards the end Lemon Loser

    Yeah I thought so too.. what’s a bit weird is that another story written by the same author as this one had a similar problem in the end according to the comments. They said that the ending was unsatisfying and felt rushed. Maybe this author has a hard time coming up with endings which is a shame. cause they would be really really great if they didn’t have this issue. Oh well I just hope the author will write and draw more and try to overcome this problem !! :33