The art is great! But either the adaptation was not well done, or there are pages missing (I’m thinking the former, unfortunately). The story had too many jumps from point a to point b, causing the over all flow of the story to be jumpy and weird. Overall though it was pretty good. The FL and ML had a relatively healthy relationship (in that the ML isn’t an ass though he still had issues and the FL wasn’t a complete Mary Sue), which was nice.
The art is great! But either the adaptation was not well done, or there are pages missing (I’m thinking the former, unfortunately). The story had too many jumps from point a to point b, causing the over all flow of the story to be jumpy and weird. Overall though it was pretty good. The FL and ML had a relatively healthy relationship (in that the ML isn’t an ass though he still had issues and the FL wasn’t a complete Mary Sue), which was nice.