I love how we literally never see any of the girls faces

PearlySkies December 27, 2020 5:36 pm

I love how we literally never see any of the girls faces

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    Nyamh December 27, 2020 10:22 pm

    Yeeep--I think he missed that red flag...how he never seems to really notice the girls' faces haha

    MinTea December 27, 2020 11:03 pm
    Yeeep--I think he missed that red flag...how he never seems to really notice the girls' faces haha Nyamh

    Oh no I'm pretty sure he already mentioned that I think in the first chapter or something like that I'm not sure but he already mentioned that.

    Nyamh December 28, 2020 12:34 am
    Oh no I'm pretty sure he already mentioned that I think in the first chapter or something like that I'm not sure but he already mentioned that. MinTea

    Yah, as I remember it, he mentioned that the girls' faces were simple and blurry, Yah?...but this story is from his point of view? So...isn't it him, then, that can't notice these girls' faces? Thus, he's the one who's missing that red flag. (In Creative Writing, we'd call his first person POV an "unreliable narrative"). Just a thought~