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I just personally feel that smut can take away from the story. I think showing love scenes is very important with lesbian lit, but it should be done tactfully. I don't feel this particular yuri does that. I think it could have been great, but the premise is lacking stamina and it's substitute is smut. But if you like it, then good. To each their own.
Yeah, I think I'm done with this. Not enough plot development and too much banging. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍