I really enjoyed the first story. I especially loved the ending when it turned out lil bro was actually a top xD I wasn't expecting that. Probably because his boyfriend seemed really stereotype seme. I will agree that it gets a little confusing to read, since there's a lot going on in some scenes, but if you don't try to speed read through it like I do, then you'll be able to make more sense of it.
I really enjoyed the first story. I especially loved the ending when it turned out lil bro was actually a top xD I wasn't expecting that. Probably because his boyfriend seemed really stereotype seme.
I will agree that it gets a little confusing to read, since there's a lot going on in some scenes, but if you don't try to speed read through it like I do, then you'll be able to make more sense of it.