I read the first chapter and almost couldn't contain myself- it was filled with so many shoujo cliches! We've got girl in love with teacher who saves her, teacher's younger brother is actually in love with her, the bullying girl group (with really minor justification even for shoujo lol), younger brother is actually the one who saves her, etc. The author must have tried so hard to fit those in it's downright hilarious (≧∀≦). The exposition was so forced it reminded me of the scene in Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki kun where he uses the background characters to make his main character's story in a really obvious way lol!
Despite the criticism, I don't really dislike the story- it just came off a bit too forced trying to fit so many things into a short time without really developing the characters enough to justify the plot. Good way to kill time, though
I read the first chapter and almost couldn't contain myself- it was filled with so many shoujo cliches! We've got girl in love with teacher who saves her, teacher's younger brother is actually in love with her, the bullying girl group (with really minor justification even for shoujo lol), younger brother is actually the one who saves her, etc. The author must have tried so hard to fit those in it's downright hilarious (≧∀≦). The exposition was so forced it reminded me of the scene in Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki kun where he uses the background characters to make his main character's story in a really obvious way lol!
Despite the criticism, I don't really dislike the story- it just came off a bit too forced trying to fit so many things into a short time without really developing the characters enough to justify the plot. Good way to kill time, though