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Most of the chapters are all about athy and claude and some are about lucas. I don't mind if Jeanette is shown in the last few chap, because we need to see her side and POV, which I believe is relevant to the story.
The pacing is slow and full of Jeanette—this is ungodly and for the life of me I just want to smack Anastacius away—like go away Anastacius, I need Athy x Lucas and Daddy Claude. I don’t need your undead ass. Also, take Jeanette with you.