Ok Ik I don’t rlly have a right to act like a critic but

3435 December 18, 2020 7:56 pm

I really dislike that this keeps using r@pe as a plot device. The fact that the r@pe scenes are so long really makes it seem like the story is s3xualizing r@pe instead of properly dealing with it. There are other ways to make stories dark - exploring mental illness further, extending the kidnapping, darker backstories...idk I’m just kind of tired lmao but again I have no right to critique since I’m not even paying for it just my opinion.

Responses
    pogtype December 18, 2020 8:01 pm

    Well said

    FluffySoul December 18, 2020 8:05 pm

    I somehow agree with you. Reading this on and off toxic relationship is tiring my only surviving brain cell. I feel bad for the characters but who knows what the author is thinking.

    3435 December 18, 2020 8:53 pm
    I somehow agree with you. Reading this on and off toxic relationship is tiring my only surviving brain cell. I feel bad for the characters but who knows what the author is thinking. FluffySoul

    Yeah I still think it’s an interesting story and maybe the author is going somewhere important with all this

    minutta December 18, 2020 9:12 pm

    not only that, but making this the scene where nakyum realizes he has a crush on seungho? he is r@aped and he blushes because oh?? i don’t dislike you actually?? the fuck was that

    inkcollector December 18, 2020 10:48 pm
    not only that, but making this the scene where nakyum realizes he has a crush on seungho? he is r@aped and he blushes because oh?? i don’t dislike you actually?? the fuck was that minutta

    At this point, I'm just glad he realized. Took him long enough.

    FluffySoul December 18, 2020 10:59 pm
    not only that, but making this the scene where nakyum realizes he has a crush on seungho? he is r@aped and he blushes because oh?? i don’t dislike you actually?? the fuck was that minutta

    I don't really know if people like Nakyum really exist. Naive and idk. If I am Nakyum's friend?Knowing this situation he's at right now, Imma give him a 500 pages of my thoughts.

    minutta December 19, 2020 9:32 am
    At this point, I'm just glad he realized. Took him long enough. inkcollector

    But did it have to happen during a rape scene? It just doesn’t sit well with me. If he had this “realization” the night the assassin kidnapped him it would’ve made more sense (for me) because Seungho was at least...nice.

    minutta December 19, 2020 9:34 am
    I don't really know if people like Nakyum really exist. Naive and idk. If I am Nakyum's friend?Knowing this situation he's at right now, Imma give him a 500 pages of my thoughts. FluffySoul

    Of course there are people who like Nakyum. He’s been dragged in Seungho’s mess against his will and when he tried to get out, he was either slapped/raped. It’s not like he has a choice.

    inkcollector December 19, 2020 9:38 pm
    But did it have to happen during a rape scene? It just doesn’t sit well with me. If he had this “realization” the night the assassin kidnapped him it would’ve made more sense (for me) because Seungho wa... minutta

    Beats me. Of all the times he could think about it, he chose that moment. Sometimes I wonder if the author's doing this on purpose to rile us up, just because it sells more. It's a bad thought, I know, I wish the author would prove me wrong and this is indeed going somewhere. Idk i guess i agree with OP it's just getting exhausting