Slightly confusing but still super good

ohgawditsal December 17, 2020 6:41 am

This story is so fast paced and there were times where I got confused about the timeline (still am a bit at the parts where he went back to the future) but overall it's still a great story. I somehow managed to skim through the raws as well, cause I couldn't wait BSJSJSJ

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    Dweeb December 17, 2020 7:14 am

    To be fair the timeline in the story makes no sense because it doesn't account for paradoxes LOL.
    So basically in these last few chapters he spends his last days in Juno's timeline, Juno gets hurt and he decides to go along with Fate because of the grandma's warning that fate spared them and them forgetting each other is better than dying. He gets in the car and crashes (we've seen this scene before). He then returns to the future almost immediately (3 years from Juno's timeline). He looses all his memory (or most of it) and had scars from the accident.

    I think he's returned to the future for a total of 3 times. 1st, he wants to meet Jay (was actually fate setting them up so they remember each other). 2nd he thinks about how there's no purpose of being in the past so he gets transported back and wakes up on the sidewalk. And then 3rd is currently.

    There might be a fourth that I'm forgetting :/

    ohgawditsal December 17, 2020 11:38 am
    To be fair the timeline in the story makes no sense because it doesn't account for paradoxes LOL. So basically in these last few chapters he spends his last days in Juno's timeline, Juno gets hurt and he decide... Dweeb

    Having it summarised like so makes it make much more sense AHAHAHA thanks, that cleared up most of my confusion.
    Still, one of the first times he travels back, Juno doesn't seem to remember him. That must be because the car crash doesn't happen, and Juno is the one who misses his memory, whereas when the crash does happen, he's the ones who looses it. That's one of my theories at least. Either that, or there's multiple alternative realities, and he travelled back to his original timeline, where he hadn't met Juno prior, which is why Juno doesn't remember him, yet he still feels the pain.
    Or maybe I'm just overthinking and have to reread it, cause I most likely missed a few clues here and there AHAHHAHA

    ohgawditsal December 17, 2020 11:39 am
    Having it summarised like so makes it make much more sense AHAHAHA thanks, that cleared up most of my confusion. Still, one of the first times he travels back, Juno doesn't seem to remember him. That must be be... ohgawditsal

    But I agree, if paradoxes were taken into account the timeline wouldn't have been as confusing.

    Dweeb December 18, 2020 7:19 am
    Having it summarised like so makes it make much more sense AHAHAHA thanks, that cleared up most of my confusion. Still, one of the first times he travels back, Juno doesn't seem to remember him. That must be be... ohgawditsal

    Okay wait.. So when MC travels back in time, future MC travels to when past MC hasn't met Juno yet. You can think of this as their first meeting ever if I'm correct. If I'm not, then the story makes no sense. Also in the original timeline MC and Juno were both supposed to loose their memory, which is why they pass each other like strangers. (Honestly that doesn't make any sense, what hospital takes both patients outta the same car, they both have amnesia, and no one tells them they were in the same car and knew each other). In Juno's timeline, they tried to change it so, it ended up a little differently with only MC loosing his memory. If I recall correctly MC was arguing with Juno in the original timeline and got into a car accident like that, which is different from Juno's timeline because Juno was unconscious the whole time.

    I might need to reread the beginning chapters against though.. I breezed through them LOL.