oh god the pacing

ms. steak December 15, 2020 10:43 pm

this author's storytelling is absolutely horrid, everything just keeps going in circles, these 27 chapters could've easily been 4 or 5

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    Local simp December 15, 2020 10:56 pm

    yea i agree, it fees like the author is dragging everything out and there are definitely some stuff they could've taken out or replaced.
    well, ive sat through worst so im gonna stay since im interested in the premise lol

    Offers12 December 15, 2020 11:02 pm

    But then things would have felt rushed I kind of like the pace of the story

    im addicted:D December 15, 2020 11:20 pm

    right ;( I just wanna see the happy ending Iā€™m sorry if I sound impatient so anyone got spoilers :D