Clancey, my man, Great plot, great great, the idea is awesome. one problem, there is no flow to the story, everything is too fast or just doesnt make sense.
and heres some real art critique that is actually helpful unlike what these arseholes said. try learning and working in anatomy and having steady lines. also try thiner lines, and try making it all flow. ive notice that anatomy is not quite there and there are many squiggle like lines in the art. and thiner lines might help appeal to the audience.
if you dont mind can u tell me what equipment u use? and if youd like id love to help you improve in both art and story telling.
Clancey, my man, Great plot, great great, the idea is awesome. one problem, there is no flow to the story, everything is too fast or just doesnt make sense.
and heres some real art critique that is actually helpful unlike what these arseholes said. try learning and working in anatomy and having steady lines. also try thiner lines, and try making it all flow. ive notice that anatomy is not quite there and there are many squiggle like lines in the art. and thiner lines might help appeal to the audience.
if you dont mind can u tell me what equipment u use? and if youd like id love to help you improve in both art and story telling.
i really think you have the potential!