Thanxx a bunch for thiss! I love the art which gives off pleasing sensory effects and i appreciate EVERY good art, esp when u can see those colorful emotions in their eyes... its overwhelming! For me cover photo should be attractive enough to catch my attention. And About this, the cover pic attracted me the most, i literally love the way , LK is looking at Junho with those squinted eyes and smug look, and that slight smirk on his face, with a hint of rough love in it, lol, i loveee it!!! I ignored all the puzzling comments n went straight for it! I mean look at it, u can see the whole story in this cover photo!!
HAHAHAHAHHAAH! you took the thoughts right out of my head (≧∀≦)
LOL :) , SO, in other words im not talking about how lustful he looks, but how much amount of diverse emotions the artist has poured into this single depiction for us to believe in exactly what he/she wanted us to.
yeah, the clarity in what was portrayed is clear, which is very nais, but imma just say, the character design sure can improve
U mean art design or character development?
character design, not their writing, i mean their looks, the character design is alright, but theres room for improvement on the character design
can you do better?
Lol i was about to ask do u draw?how can u tell about the improvement in looks!
aren't you being a bit disrespectful? I mean, this is a skilled talented artist. I'd hate her style change
I'm asking sincerely. not trying to attack you on these questions. Which exact features do you see as flawed? I'm interested.
I have read Coexistance. And i dont see any flaw in the art or style and i dont feel a need of any improvement! N i think almost everyone here agrees with this. Btw im currently reading Lost Virgin!
im not trying to be disrespectful, im sorry if it seemed like it. im just pointing out and critiquing it as a reader of this comic. theres always room for improvement on everything (⌒▽⌒)
i didnt mean to be rude to the artist, im just saying, the blue-haired main character and the grey-haired character look quite similar, which can be hard to distinguish from a silhouette. im not saying i can draw any better. im just saying, from a silhouette, its not that clear on who is who between the both of them.
id like to imply im merely making a suggestion, i dont know if its the artist’s idea to make them look alike on purpose, or where they are going with the designs. i have not researched the artists, and therefore i am just saying all this with what i am seeing in the comic
the pierced lip is how I tell
im saying all i said because of some insights an art student said (⌒▽⌒), im not trying to pick on the designs rudely, i dont want to do that. anything that is published on the internet is entitled to be critiqued, including every single comic thats on this website. everyone can say anything that they want as long as it doesn't enter the realm of defamation and so on.
ik it’s incredibly rude to pick on someone’s personal designs without permission or forewarning, but on the other hand these characters are not just theirs. this could potentially get well-known, so it’s the literal job of the producers, etc. to critique and nitpick in order to refine them and make them the best they can possibly be.
its also incredibly important for artists to receive feedback no matter how harsh in order to grow and improve. id like too see this artist grow as well (=・ω・=)
yeah, but what if the entire character were to be blacked out like in a silhouette? i think the artist should be a bit more clear in that aspect :))
by no means am i saying it is flawed. art is inherently subjective, but that doesnt mean there arent objective elements.
not at all, but that doesn't mean i cant critique the art just because i’m not better than the artist. i may not have the skills to draw like this artist, but that doesn’t t mean i can’t see.
WOAH !Lol For me i wont ever criticize over the art design not even as a reader, cz its totally subjective & im no artist ,tbh ive liked every character design ive ever seen.n i like versatility. People here criticize a lot about art when they dont even have a perspective of it.just cz the art is different from what u like doesnt mean its bad.I read somewhere,it was smthg like :That to understand art(as a whole)u have to be "educated",and education means not science or maths only, but in moral education and ethics as well!"Ig i get it now, how can someone aged 13, 14 or so can know what n how an art should be just cz they read it!! & makes sense how they think that every r*pe art they see is normalizing it n they want it out..its just like once QS said that: do u see a painting n tell the painter that i want it to be like this or that?..smthg like this, right.Lol..idk i might be wrong Ig QS can guide better on everything related.
yeah, i saw QS’ comment on that too. its not about changing the subject of the art, more like, just pointing out where it can be improved, but what some people do is demand that tis subject be change entirely just because it isnt to their personal preference.
to understand the art as a whole, yeah you should get some insight and knowledge as to how to works. saying ‘critique’ with only : “haha, lmao, it sucks” is baseless. you need reason as to what your critique would be.
just clarifying cuz i dont understand, wdym by “how can someone 13, 14 or so can know what and how art should be just cause they read it”?
anyone wanna talk about the art or somthin? if so just say it here ╮(￣▽￣)╭