Underwhelming

Dingo123 December 2, 2020 3:43 pm

I don't know why but this story was very underwhelming. Its like many of their reactions and emotions etc lacked in many moments throughout the story. Like when they found out abt the pregnancy = vry lacking reactions, when he woke up from the coma = wasn't that emotional, when he saw his children = very underwhelming... Idk but I liked the story regardless

Responses
    Ivonna December 2, 2020 5:08 pm

    Yeah I feel you!! I wanted way more story to it... everything kinda resolved super quickly and I would have loved to see more of everything!!!

    Dingo123 December 2, 2020 5:17 pm
    Yeah I feel you!! I wanted way more story to it... everything kinda resolved super quickly and I would have loved to see more of everything!!! Ivonna

    Yes exactly! Like even the whole past life idea I thought was going somewhere but it never really did... it just happened and then the heirloom made them remember?? Very weird. Not to mention I wanted more children and family scenes (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

    Sugakookie December 2, 2020 6:36 pm

    I felt the exact same way lol. Very rushed and underwhelming but nice for a light read

    aggravated seme December 2, 2020 10:31 pm

    Wow I feel this way completely. I had a lot of questions and found myself confused, but it was cute...