Confusing moments in the story

Dingo123 November 29, 2020 11:29 am

These are some of the points I've noticed so far that has been on my mind:

• Why is the Prince so interested in the mc when she's supposedly just a maid? He even got jealous about the necklace belonging to her "ex-lover" which makes no sense bc he's the Prince and she's just a random maid he met who did nothing big enough to leave a lasting impression on him for him to be remembering her.

• If she suddenly has a bought nobility status then why has the Duke still not hired etiquette lessons in being a Noble Lady for her yet. We've already seen her eat at the table with noble guests but how does she know table etiquette? She just danced at the ball and even admitted to not knowing how. We also know she can't read & write so....

• Also why is there not any defining features to FL's character besides the fact that she stayed by the Dukes side when he was cursed. All she does is smile, stay in her role as a maid, treat the Duke as a child and worry about the books storyline.

• FL's inner dialogue is also very vague and limited. She repeats the same things over and over again.

• Why is the King suspicious about her having a part in the curse lifting when all FL needs to say is that she and the Duke got close bc she stayed by his side and that's the sole reason Duke is obsessed with her. I don't understand how he thinks a mere maid has any part in it, it could have been the work of one of the countless sorcerers that visited the Duke. (Even tho we readers know, there is literally no proof for the King to be sus)

• FL is now worrying about the Princess and the Prince getting together. Assuming she believes the story is still following the main storyline, the Princess will eventually fall in love with the Prince so why does FL feel the need to "help" or intervene to make sure they get together when all her original purpose was to help the Duke live a good life.

These are some of the things that keep playing on my mind that just don't make sense. Overall the story is quite enjoyable so I guess you can overlook them. Does anybody else else think about this? Please let me know (●'◡'●)ノ

Responses
    Kuku November 29, 2020 4:21 pm

    Im really agree with u.. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜literally everything tht u point out have been wondering in my mind. i just want to enter the story and scold fl for worrying others so much.. luckyly i cant ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Dingo123 November 29, 2020 4:35 pm
    Im really agree with u.. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜literally everything tht u point out have been wondering in my mind. i just want to enter the story and scold fl for worrying others so much.. luckyly i cant ╮( ̄▽... Kuku

    Exactly I feel like Ibelina is inviting more trouble than actually solving them.. Honestly FL knows that the Princess is the reason for the Dukes downfall therefore I don't understand why she wants to get herself involved with her. Like LET HER BE (︶︿︶)=凸

    Kuku November 29, 2020 5:03 pm
    Exactly I feel like Ibelina is inviting more trouble than actually solving them.. Honestly FL knows that the Princess is the reason for the Dukes downfall therefore I don't understand why she wants to get herse... Dingo123

    Hmm yeahh she should be bother her own life (︶︿︶)=凸.. and because of her "kindness", i will drop this manhwa if she be more kindness than she should be.. but then i still hope that she will realized it smhヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ " why do i speak like shes a real person tho ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍"

    Ria December 1, 2020 12:04 pm

    Girl I was jus about to start ts story for the first time but even Ik if a person can write 3-5 paragraphs of why the story is confusing then Ik ts is not the book for me LMAOAOAOAO now Ik I’m jus gon be wasting my time if I click on ts story thx for the heads up

    Dingo123 December 1, 2020 1:06 pm
    Girl I was jus about to start ts story for the first time but even Ik if a person can write 3-5 paragraphs of why the story is confusing then Ik ts is not the book for me LMAOAOAOAO now Ik I’m jus gon be wast... Ria

    OMG SKAJKAJSKHA NOOO read a few chaps before you decide to drop hahaha I found it enjoyable if you can get by some plot holes and unrealistic moments. Although I do know a lot of ppl (from reviews) are getting tired of the slow plot and her 1 dimensional personality (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

    Ria December 1, 2020 4:17 pm
    OMG SKAJKAJSKHA NOOO read a few chaps before you decide to drop hahaha I found it enjoyable if you can get by some plot holes and unrealistic moments. Although I do know a lot of ppl (from reviews) are getting ... Dingo123

    Ok then I’ll try it ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Swan-MF. December 4, 2020 4:10 pm

    The common cliché of romance novels and storyline tbh. Like the level of logic is just low as shit. Also about your second bullet point. She learned basic etiquette, reading, writing and other etiquette shit from that Knight with silver hair when they were working in a barons mansion. But yeah she still needs a lot of work even with basic knowledge. SEHS ANNOYING AF NOW. PLOT ARMOR JUST FUCKING DON'T.

    Dingo123 December 4, 2020 4:31 pm
    The common cliché of romance novels and storyline tbh. Like the level of logic is just low as shit. Also about your second bullet point. She learned basic etiquette, reading, writing and other etiquette shit f... Swan-MF.

    Oh yeah I must have missed that haha. I still believe she needs more lessons though I mean considering she might become a Duchess in the future. I agree with you she's definitely a Mary Sue character. Very surprising that everything is revolving around her when she's just a maid. I get other stories where the mc might be a Princess, a noble etc. but here its a little unrealistic yeah?

    Swan-MF. December 4, 2020 4:46 pm
    Oh yeah I must have missed that haha. I still believe she needs more lessons though I mean considering she might become a Duchess in the future. I agree with you she's definitely a Mary Sue character. Very surp... Dingo123

    Frl. At this point the story is just becoming unrealistically annoying. But the thing that's bothering me is her family. Like she didn't get memories from original ibeline and its like the author just doesn't wanna work on it. THERE IS NO MENTION OF HER PAST AND SHE DOESNT GIVE A SHIT.

    Dingo123 December 4, 2020 5:17 pm
    Frl. At this point the story is just becoming unrealistically annoying. But the thing that's bothering me is her family. Like she didn't get memories from original ibeline and its like the author just doesn't w... Swan-MF.

    Actually yeah, who even was ibeline before she inhabited her body??

    somewhere December 5, 2020 5:56 am
    Actually yeah, who even was ibeline before she inhabited her body?? Dingo123

    oof, i agree! also how could she not know conjunctions when she was taught by ms knight? ms girl i tot u were from the future! (/TДT)/ it was one of the things taught when ur a kid. and now, she doesnt know? i mean not like i expected her to be smart or something but at least she might have basic knowledge!
    (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
    it not like im hating her or smthn for being dumb or whateva
    ( ̄へ ̄)but please this kinda just doesnt make sense u know? she is living a normal life she prob have studied she has a smartphone right? but whateva (︶︿︶)=凸

    i think she forgot, but i mean u can remember it tho? ヽ(`Д´)ノ