Uhm... I mean

narwa November 27, 2020 1:33 am

I know these stories run on clichés and misunderstanding and a few paradoxical idiotic traits from a few character in key positions, but...

1) The reincarnated twins thing is a blatant escamotage to make the twins reason like a reader would so readers connect with them and have them be able to survive abuse and neglect on their own as babies, it has no other use.

2) Why is the imperial family composed of incompetent people who don't really know how to use power and attract faithful allies? Why aren't they more careful of everything they do and say as well as what others do and say, if they are aware of the dangers around them, even inside the palace?

3) Why are the supposed "experts" in the palace such incompetents? Why is there no "guide" figure to teach and help the twins?

4) How about, you know... exchanging more than 2 to 3 5-word sentences when talking about important topics, to avoid miscommunication?

5) ... please, no more dumb, cliché plot twists to lose problematic plotholes. Like the alcoholic mother not being human, or the Ross/Rosea/whatever slimy dude doing all this because of some twisted unrequited and abusive emotional thing he had for the late empress.

Responses
    JustSomeCutiePoppinBy November 27, 2020 4:31 pm

    I usually like the cheesy cliché plotlines, but honestly, I agree with most of your points. But this webtoon isn't so bad, I guess. The problem I have is the miscommunication between the father and the children. Although, it's really cute seeing Arjen and Arien being pampered lol

    narwa November 27, 2020 9:28 pm
    I usually like the cheesy cliché plotlines, but honestly, I agree with most of your points. But this webtoon isn't so bad, I guess. The problem I have is the miscommunication between the father and the childr... JustSomeCutiePoppinBy

    I mean, clichés work exactly because they are clichés... it just gets too much when it's overdone.
    The story itself is very interesting, I'm curious to see how it develops.
    And yes, the twins are adorable and I want to see them happy and pampered (=・ω・=)

    JustSomeCutiePoppinBy November 28, 2020 6:23 pm
    I mean, clichés work exactly because they are clichés... it just gets too much when it's overdone.The story itself is very interesting, I'm curious to see how it develops.And yes, the twins are adorable and I... narwa

    Yesss!!! I just really want them to communicate better !! Although, I don't blame Arjen and Arien for assuming bad things about him. They've been through a hell of a lot.