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it was meant to be short and we knew that from the beginning because it tells you how many chapters on the first page. it seems to me that you were expecting too much which is your fault since you knew what u were getting into to began with.
I read short things that were great, some of which made me cry. Short doesn't mean it can't be good. Also I didn't mension this being short once so that's a questionable point.
Kind of mah. It's not bad but... not very good. I wasnt really invested in the charaters and their struggeles, and all of it came off really flat to me. Also it was kind of hard for me to believe that they love each other since there was no focus there. It's not bad, just very mah. If you'd like somthing light, this could be cool I guess.