Yeah I felt the same way you did, I felt like the storyline didn't go very far. Every chapter seems to be about rough the same thing.
you guys are seriously blaming the victim? Did you read the story he's being very carefully raised that way...to be spoiled and dependent on somebody who got his hooks on him super young.
Doesn't make the story any more interesting.
that's true no I didn't find it interesting either....delivery fell flat...
I actually out loud at your response. Haha! I thought the story had potential that's why I read it; it's why we all read it. I agree that the delivery fell flat. You put in better words than I could.
It needed a sense of danger that wasn't there
Sorry about the you guys comment...I was cranky
Forgot to hit reply
No worries! (⌒▽⌒)
Am I the only one who disliked the story? I understood all the hardship Nao had to go through, but lol, his spoiled and selfish attitude pissed me off so much. Art is beautiful though and that's the only reason I'm giving it a 3 star