On the fence

wicketginger November 25, 2020 5:50 am

I liked this but I feel it could have been better. I spent a lot of the time confused.

I felt it jumped around a lot. Story lines were thrown in in the middle of another story line but it was treated like you should have already known.

It got more confusing towards the end.

Responses
    Aica November 25, 2020 7:14 am

    Thought so too! I liked the premise, but the last few chapters were confusing (─.─||)

    Froggyis November 25, 2020 7:17 am

    Exactly. Some plot devices were never explained. The story could’ve had more grounding. I said that in a previous post about this comic. It did get more confusing as the conclusion neared. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

    HarleyQRaven November 25, 2020 7:31 am

    Agree!!! I wonder if the Author was forced to meet an unreasonable deadline and perhaps had planned out a longer story. I gave it 4 stars because I felt it had great potential had the ending not been so confusing and rushed. But I see extras are being posted so hopefully loose ends are tied!

    Jeon-Cookies November 25, 2020 4:05 pm

    I agree ( ̄へ ̄)

    wicketginger November 25, 2020 7:13 pm

    Oh good. I thought it might have just been me.